Voiceover

Since our first rough edit, we have really thought hard about changes we could make to the scenes. We have considered a voiceover for a while now and after seeing the first scene, we feel that this is completely necessary for the piece to flow properly. We have decided to have a voiceover from the detective's perspective as this is a typical convention of noir films and can give some context to the scene.

Max has started the script and we hope to get this done as soon as we have finished the script.

EDIT: Max has got his dad to record the voiceover five times, each of which are slightly different, I will listen to all of them we will decide which is most suitable. We then have to place this properly, which Max will decide once he has seen the film.

EDIT: I have chosen Max's favourite, the third voiceover as it the most well spoken and the pauses are long enough for me to play around with.