Music Problems

The music for the end sequence does not work in it's current state, this is due to the change of pace since our storyboarding changes. Before the change, we had a montage of pictures as the last scene, now we have an extended scene of the police role as we thought the montage was unnecessary and this is a better way of introducing the character.

This means that the fast paced, heavy music no longer works and I will have to revert to the earlier stage of the music to make it work but this means the conventions are kept truer to original film noir.

I am going back to the original idea as it is less intense feel and I believe it will fit a lot better. Here is the metal track:



And this is the original which I will be looking to re record:



EDIT: I have re-recorded a better version of the Jazz music as well as an extended version of the first piece which was changed to fit the length of the film better. This has been edited into the film.