This is the edit according to feedback we received about titles. The title of the film is now much more significant. We tried making the word 'In' in italics but in the end, we just cut up the title and extended it slightly.
Fatal Motive Final cut Feedback from Sam SheepDawg-OEight on Vimeo.
please bullet point the changes you made in response to feedback - keep it brief and as a list - explore in detail in the evaluation
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